Full moon (END)

If you use RSS, you might already know I've restarted the Five Mighty Damsels.

I'm sorry this chapter was based on a flimsy premise that didn't really advance the plot. I even skipped a few planed pages not to drag on longer.

Thanks for your comments, bug reports and criticism.

18 replies to “Full moon (END)”

  1. HumalaDuck

    Inky, I don't understand why you're so down on the plot density of this chapter.  Ink Dolls has always been a bit silly and slice-of-life-y, this chapter was just a bit more so.  It didn't feel to me like it was a radical departure, and we got good doses of character development and fun.  No complaints from me.

    • Inkdolls

      Hey, thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

      I just feel that I need to bring back some of what made me feel excited in the old times.

  2. edcentric

    So I am a comic late, but is her grant concerning a performance involving Little Red RH, or is it literally LRRH fucking?
    Just curious.

    • Inkdolls

      A performance only. No porn.

  3. Weiser

    It's her tail. I don't know how Pearl managed it, but obviously it isn't hanging at her back any more as in panel 3, - so ...

    • LOLOLOLOLOL It's really her tail. I didn't have noticed that xD

      • Inkdolls

        I´ll correct the as soon as I can.

    • Inkdolls

      Yikes 😅! A continuity error!

      That's another theory to consider, but she didn't have a tail the previous time... Hmm...

  4. gigantes

    Sounds like a plan.  I made my critique around the time of the bowling sequence, and didn't want to belabor the point. I liked part four (and all the earlier books, really), but part five seemed unusually unfocused.  Oh well; it happens.  Maybe it's time for them to get out a little bit.

    Here's a small idea for a future book-- the gang takes a road trip to take care of a relatively serious matter that crops up.  Perhaps an inheritance, a legal matter, or a small mystery.  Along the way they discover events related to that, but also experience their usual sexy hijinks.  Perhaps some of the earlier characters (the circus family) could be reintroduced.

    • Inkdolls

      Well, thanks for speaking your mind. Your comments were useful and I'm glad you liked the other parts.

      Bringing back a few characters is part of the plan, but I guess I haven't quite conjured up an exciting adventure. I like your trip suggestion, seems like a good setting for trouble.

      • Ink, Gigante's suggestion is great. I'd love to read about an adventure with the gang as they face up mysteries and sexy situations ^_^ But I think I also understand exactly what he means about this chapter 5 being a little messy :< After the page 15 I waited to see the 16 so I could understand the grandma-joke and why Pearl was painted like a wolf, but the chapter finished and I couldn't understand what was going on the story :/

        • Inkdolls

          Well, on page 11, grandma says (regarding the project) "Maybe it's about a granny who misses her dear granddaughter". I guess it's hard to keep track of dialogue on a weekly scheduled comic.

          Thanks for your feedback. I'll try to do better next time.

  5. Such nice lighting!!

    • Inkdolls

      Thanks. Large shades can be tricky.

  6. jamie59

    It's a curved Dildo she can put in herself & use like a strap-on.

    • Inkdolls

      Or it could be something else.

      We'll never know.

      • HumalaDuck

        Clearly it's due to her...animal magnetism.

        I'll see myself out.

        • Inkdolls

          Any theory is valid.