If you use RSS, you might already know I've restarted the Five Mighty Damsels.
I'm sorry this chapter was based on a flimsy premise that didn't really advance the plot. I even skipped a few planed pages not to drag on longer.
Thanks for your comments, bug reports and criticism.
Ink Dolls
Sexy misadventures of Mar and Sabina
29/Apr/2019
Inky, I don't understand why you're so down on the plot density of this chapter. Ink Dolls has always been a bit silly and slice-of-life-y, this chapter was just a bit more so. It didn't feel to me like it was a radical departure, and we got good doses of character development and fun. No complaints from me.
Hey, thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
I just feel that I need to bring back some of what made me feel excited in the old times.
So I am a comic late, but is her grant concerning a performance involving Little Red RH, or is it literally LRRH fucking?
Just curious.
A performance only. No porn.
It's her tail. I don't know how Pearl managed it, but obviously it isn't hanging at her back any more as in panel 3, - so ...
LOLOLOLOLOL It's really her tail. I didn't have noticed that xD
I´ll correct the as soon as I can.
Yikes 😅! A continuity error!
That's another theory to consider, but she didn't have a tail the previous time... Hmm...
Sounds like a plan. I made my critique around the time of the bowling sequence, and didn't want to belabor the point. I liked part four (and all the earlier books, really), but part five seemed unusually unfocused. Oh well; it happens. Maybe it's time for them to get out a little bit.
Here's a small idea for a future book-- the gang takes a road trip to take care of a relatively serious matter that crops up. Perhaps an inheritance, a legal matter, or a small mystery. Along the way they discover events related to that, but also experience their usual sexy hijinks. Perhaps some of the earlier characters (the circus family) could be reintroduced.
Well, thanks for speaking your mind. Your comments were useful and I'm glad you liked the other parts.
Bringing back a few characters is part of the plan, but I guess I haven't quite conjured up an exciting adventure. I like your trip suggestion, seems like a good setting for trouble.
Ink, Gigante's suggestion is great. I'd love to read about an adventure with the gang as they face up mysteries and sexy situations ^_^ But I think I also understand exactly what he means about this chapter 5 being a little messy :< After the page 15 I waited to see the 16 so I could understand the grandma-joke and why Pearl was painted like a wolf, but the chapter finished and I couldn't understand what was going on the story :/
Well, on page 11, grandma says (regarding the project) "Maybe it's about a granny who misses her dear granddaughter". I guess it's hard to keep track of dialogue on a weekly scheduled comic.
Thanks for your feedback. I'll try to do better next time.
Such nice lighting!!
Thanks. Large shades can be tricky.
It's a curved Dildo she can put in herself & use like a strap-on.
Or it could be something else.
We'll never know.
Clearly it's due to her...animal magnetism.
I'll see myself out.
Any theory is valid.