Actually, Nestor spoke once before. Comic #023 "Dummy". Nestor calls Angel "dummy", but it's in a small speech bubble, which I suppose means his voice was small or quiet.
That makes this the second time Nestor has talked.
It seems Néstor dreams so hard.... and maybe Mar helped him to come shaking him in that way XD Hey what a shame, he missed her face! d'oh! maybe this is the most explicit strip of the comic ...and I like it! :)
As for story continuity the strip is going nice, just as I can expect from slice-of-life kind of comic. However there is a lot unanswered questions throughout the story and I don't get the feeling that they will be answered. Maybe that is hurting the continuity feel.
I never noticed that Mar had something against Sabina. I think she is just normal and Sabina too crazy
Somehow my brain can't stop thinking that there is hand coming out of the computer screen on the last panel.
Thank you Mr Spy (hehe)! Yes you have a point! There are too many open questions for such a linear and simple story! I will move some of the answers to an earlier point than originally planned and stop bringing in new ones.
Also, the first part of your comment, coming from you, had the side effect of taking off a burden of insecurity. I know, silly me.
(and by comics that had me clueless I meant Hunter Dogs)
I don't see the problem with the writing..Do you mean the xhole plot, or just the dialogs? As for the dialogs, you can really do better...Young people talking, you can't expect much, and more worked dialogs could sound a little fishy.
As for the plot evolution..yeah, there's something, i must admit that i never know where you're heading to...Separatly, the strips are funny, and overall it's good, but i'm kinda lost concerning the whole story. But yeah, it's kinda hard to assembly all idead in one and solid block.
Actually, Nestor spoke once before. Comic #023 "Dummy". Nestor calls Angel "dummy", but it's in a small speech bubble, which I suppose means his voice was small or quiet.
That makes this the second time Nestor has talked.
He did speak indeed... But nobody heard him.
Ohhh great stuff! Glad you went there.
I'm glad too.
Too sexy! Who hasn't fallen asleep on the couch like that?
Wow, i didn't expect so..And so Mar XD
It seems Néstor dreams so hard.... and maybe Mar helped him to come shaking him in that way XD
Hey what a shame, he missed her face! d'oh!
maybe this is the most explicit strip of the comic ...and I like it! :)
Being touched while asleep could lead to this outcome indeed.
Yes I had a bit more than the usual nerve to draw this but it was necessary.
lol that's too funny =)
Haha this is so funny. She look's lovely panicked! I'm sure it would be worse if he had woke up.
He could have just waken up and be looking with surprise at Mar's eyes while he ejaculates. That could work too.
Oooppsss seems Nestor suffer from priapism :p
He is just having an erotic dream. I think priapism is painful and not related to erotic stimulation.
oh Mar is Fellini's fan, a woman of intellect!
Mar is inclined to intellectual pursuits.
As for story continuity the strip is going nice, just as I can expect from slice-of-life kind of comic. However there is a lot unanswered questions throughout the story and I don't get the feeling that they will be answered. Maybe that is hurting the continuity feel.
I never noticed that Mar had something against Sabina. I think she is just normal and Sabina too crazy
Somehow my brain can't stop thinking that there is hand coming out of the computer screen on the last panel.
Thank you Mr Spy (hehe)! Yes you have a point! There are too many open questions for such a linear and simple story! I will move some of the answers to an earlier point than originally planned and stop bringing in new ones.
Also, the first part of your comment, coming from you, had the side effect of taking off a burden of insecurity. I know, silly me.
(and by comics that had me clueless I meant Hunter Dogs)
Nothing to be insecure about man, you're doing a great job!
Sorry to trick you with Hunter Dogs ^^
Mar is collecting incriminating pictures since long ago in this. What is she up to?
BTW she stunning in the second and third panel.
She is, I didn't see the connection. Relates to your comment in the next strip.
personally, i like the slightly off language. i dont know why but it just fits.
Wow an introspective Sabina!
I don't see the problem with the writing..Do you mean the xhole plot, or just the dialogs?
As for the dialogs, you can really do better...Young people talking, you can't expect much, and more worked dialogs could sound a little fishy.
As for the plot evolution..yeah, there's something, i must admit that i never know where you're heading to...Separatly, the strips are funny, and overall it's good, but i'm kinda lost concerning the whole story. But yeah, it's kinda hard to assembly all idead in one and solid block.
Thanks for your input!
Angs: I know what you mean, I have been on the other side, feeling clueless when following an ongoing comic.
Mar? What are you doing?! XD
Well,i didn't saw the vote button until then, i voted
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