Great trick

There are still six pages to go (I'm even removing a few) where only small antics happen.

I was afraid of handling more complexity for a more dynamic and less inconsequential chapter.

I hope to do better in upcoming comics.

8 replies to “Great trick”

  1. I think the little funny moments are good for a webcomic like this. So long as you're willing to draw them, don't apologise for writing them.

    • Inkdolls

      Thanks. Fun is good.

  2. jamie59

    Pearl's the pocketless pick pocket.

    • Inkdolls

      Heh. Indeed.

  3. Kona

    Pearl is dangerously adept.  We would like to hope she only uses her powers for good, but she’s showing signs of doing otherwise.  

    I’m happy to follow these angels wherever the muse takes you.  Lots of comics have been successful with very little consequential action, just fun interactions of interesting characters.  

    • gigantes

      > Lots of comics have been successful with very little consequential action

      I'm not sure which ones you have in mind, but it indeed looks like there's some consequential action going on here, just like this fine strip showed from the beginning.

      • Inkdolls

        Hi. What I meant is the story will see less progress as a whole from this chapter than I wish it would. Thanks 😉.

    • Inkdolls

      Yes, Pearl is pushing it.